Carpe Diem’s Tan Renga: The Imaginator’s “With light in your eyes”

I’ve missed a few on this challenge so this is my fourth Tan Renga response.

(The Imaginator)

With light in your eyes

You embrace me in your arms

Our hearts beat as one

(Me)

Heat amplified with your touch

Breath on my neck almost burns

For more responses to The Imaginator’s “with light in your eyes” visit Carpe Diem’s Tan Renga Challenge.

9 thoughts on “Carpe Diem’s Tan Renga: The Imaginator’s “With light in your eyes”

  1. Burning breath is better than dragon breath! 😉

    BTW, the link you left on Carpe Diem leads to your administrator’s page. I had to go through some contortions to get here. Just thought you should know! 😉

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