I’ve missed a few on this challenge so this is my fourth Tan Renga response.
(The Imaginator)
With light in your eyes
You embrace me in your arms
Our hearts beat as one
(Me)
Heat amplified with your touch
Breath on my neck almost burns
For more responses to The Imaginator’s “with light in your eyes” visit Carpe Diem’s Tan Renga Challenge.
Burning breath is better than dragon breath! 😉
BTW, the link you left on Carpe Diem leads to your administrator’s page. I had to go through some contortions to get here. Just thought you should know! 😉
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Thanks for letting me know…not sure how I did that. Will remove it. Thanks for visiting.
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love the heat in this one….
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that’s one powerful breath and a strong finish. ☺
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Turn the heat on … very nice continuation of the strong romance in the first stanza … very well done.
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Glad you like it. I love your Tan Renga challenge and hope it continues after November. 🙂
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It continues but than once a week
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Burning breath.. love how you used it… 🙂
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thanks. Really liked your vampire spin on it.
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