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Carpe Diem’s Tan Renga: This Dark Autumn Night

Posted on November 12, 2013 by kfar2013

Tan Renga #2

(Lothar)

This dark autumn night

The bright stars of milky way

Cries of geese above

(Me)

Fresh spring morning on the air

Robin’s trill rings clear and true

15 thoughts on “Carpe Diem’s Tan Renga: This Dark Autumn Night”

jrbsays on November 13, 2013 at 2:10 am said:

Many of us wish we could skip straight from Autumn to Spring!
Lovely to meet you at Carpe Diem 🙂

This Dark Autumn Night

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- kfar2013 on November 13, 2013 at 2:32 pm said:
  
  Thanks for your visit to my blog. I must be in denial of the impending snow and ice. Great to see you bringing attention to dementia on your blog. It’s such a huge issue.
  
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magicalmysticalteacher on November 13, 2013 at 7:02 am said:

Whoa! You went from autumn to spring in a mere breath! 😉

My Tan Renga Completion

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- kfar2013 on November 13, 2013 at 2:32 pm said:
  
  If only it were that simple and magical. 🙂
  
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artmusedog on November 13, 2013 at 8:50 am said:

Wonderful transition of night to morning ~ great completion ~ carol, xxx

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- kfar2013 on November 13, 2013 at 2:34 pm said:
  
  Thanks for the visit. I’m glad you enjoyed the read.
  
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Björn Rudberg (brudberg) on November 13, 2013 at 3:59 pm said:

autumn to spring without winter… love that

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- kfar2013 on November 13, 2013 at 5:23 pm said:
  
  I’m already yearning for the heat of the sun and fresh vegetables with months to go.
  
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WabiSabi on November 13, 2013 at 8:14 pm said:

I too would welcome a winter that was a mere breath between verses!! Welcome to Carpe Diem!

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- kfar2013 on November 13, 2013 at 8:44 pm said:
  
  To me Spring is Fall’s complement like opposing hues on a color wheel so to be honest the thought of winter was secondary. Thanks for the welcome! The Carpe Diem community has turned out to be a lovely place to visit. 🙂
  
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Chèvrefeuille on November 14, 2013 at 6:17 am said:

I like the way how you have completed this Tan Renga … the jump to spring is such an excellent idea. By the way … welcome at Carpe Diem Haiku Kai … I am your host and I hope to see you here again. Welcome to our haiku-family.

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Sun on November 14, 2013 at 10:51 am said:

simply refreshing – thank you. now i am looking forward to spring

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atrm61 on November 15, 2013 at 2:29 am said:

Loved the second line -great imagery:-)I for one,would not be happy if winter went missing-love it-bestt season-in India a least,lol!Welcome to CD:-)

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atrm61 on November 15, 2013 at 2:32 am said:

oops-the “t” on my keyboard is misbehaving-sorry for the “bestt” and the missing”t”: in at

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Rosanna on December 3, 2013 at 6:59 am said:

So interesting to learn about tan renga. Must give it a try sometime…

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