Carpe Diem’s Tan Renga: This Dark Autumn Night

Tan Renga #2

(Lothar)

This dark autumn night

The bright stars of milky way

Cries of geese above

(Me)

Fresh spring morning on the air

Robin’s trill rings clear and true

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15 thoughts on “Carpe Diem’s Tan Renga: This Dark Autumn Night

    • To me Spring is Fall’s complement like opposing hues on a color wheel so to be honest the thought of winter was secondary. Thanks for the welcome! The Carpe Diem community has turned out to be a lovely place to visit. 🙂

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  1. I like the way how you have completed this Tan Renga … the jump to spring is such an excellent idea. By the way … welcome at Carpe Diem Haiku Kai … I am your host and I hope to see you here again. Welcome to our haiku-family.

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